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Considering I love the Social Network seen, this has been well written. I will even socialize with a porta potty rental company. As I have found myself liking wall photos of them, and even went to a facebook page and hung out there, anyway the moral is. I love your social networking page, thanks for sharing.
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I got them from him a while back so no problem there.
All good. So now I am thinking how about mentioning some of the class projects underway, just to give folks a sense of the connection to the work in the classroom…..
I changed "goals" to "aspects" and a few more words in the 2 paras below the 3 bullets — I just didn't think the 3 bullets described "goals," per se, as the Lab already does all those things now. I neatened up 1 or 2 instances of spelling and sentence structure. And I changed Kimon's biog slightly— "planning for" didn't seem necessary as it's basically encompassed in "managing," and the way his PhD was mentioned before seemed only to emphasize that he has one, rather than explain its application to the Lab.
I am not sure who has the DML images at this point. Michael, perhaps?
Will work on my text as I said above. For the recruitment flyer I will be adding some images, but that is best done with Indesign so we can think of this as a workspace specifically for the text.
I think this is a good start. I would suggest working a little more on the copy for David and Kimon; the tone is a little more casual than the rest of the copy, but otherwise, with a few images, it is shaping up nicely.
So the document is now on the wiki and we can collaboratively author it here (kind of a wiki proof of concept). As per Elena's suggestion I have added some information about David and myself, but I think David needs to really do his own little blurb.
Any suggestions are welcome so please contribute away!